IB HL Essay

I have attached my final draft for this essay. Any photos I referenced can be found online by just searching their title name as they are too large to upload. I need my paper to have as close to 0% AI detection as possible. Maybe it needs to be reworded or the sentence structure needs to be changed. If you could further my points, that would be helpful to help it seem more human. I just cannot have any AI detection but I can’t lose my argument and points in the process of humanizing.